Once there was a group of friends. Their names were. Joey, Issac, Frank, Daniel, Emma and Dawn. One day, they were going to hang out and decided to go to an abandoned school. Joey and Daniel heard something about the school being haunted. The cameras are on, but the office is boarded up and dark. The group was determined to get in. Finally, they found a door that was unlocked. The hallway was dark with only window light peering in. There were spider webs everywhere. They walked into the first door on the left. It looked like it was a kindergarten class with a rug and little chairs and tables. There was a rocking chair with a bookcase behind it. Tiny backpacks were on the floor and signs that something happened here.

Dawn and Emma looked out and straight up at the camera that was pointing directly at them. They jumped back and screamed and ran for the others and said, โ€œDaniel, it’s true the cameras are on!โ€

Then Joey said, โ€œWe were just joking, really didnโ€™t think it was true!โ€ He looked out in the hall. There was a little room that was boarded up. They all gasped. They saw a dark monster and no one knew what it was. It terrified them! They kept looking for other rooms. They saw the bathroom and didn’t go in because it gave off cold, weary, spine-chilling vibes! They all kept walking, and secretly, Isaac looked at a hallway at the terrible sight and shed a tear in horror!

They were going past a camera and Frank said, โ€œJoe, stop blowing on my neck!โ€ Joey was at the front of the group and Dawn was next to Frank and gave him a confused look. But when Frank turned around all the cameras were looking directly at him. Why?ย  Joey, Issac and Daniel were at the front of the group and Issac whispered, โ€œI am scared, I think we should get out of this place!โ€ย 

โ€œYeah, it’s giving me the creeps,โ€ said Daniel. โ€œHey, what’s that!โ€ย  At the end of the hall, they saw a door.ย  They ran out the door and went outside all except Frank, who had gone missing. He was last seen right past the office door with the weird, dark-shaped monsters taking him away! He was crying and screaming for his life, and they had walked into the most cariest thing they had ever seenย ย ย 

It was aโ€ฆdun dun dun!!!  We may never know.

Lydia Damata

Great Brook School

Grade 6